I have taken our teachers feedback into consideration.
We have decided to cut two versus out of the song to make it a reasonable length as 4:10 is much too long.
We have decided not to incorporate the idea of the girl getting older as she runs because it would be a sudden jump from using the girl to using an older woman which many people would not understand. There isn't a way to merge the two softly so we have decided just to make her face and clothes dirier as she runs.
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