Emily, Megan, Sam first cut feedback
Feedback from Mrs Allison on the first cut of your music video
• There is a clear sense of style in your countryside shots
• You have created quite a magical effect – reminds me of Pans Labyrinth (check this out)
• At the moment your train sequence doesn’t seem to fit with the overall style – if you return to this location it may help at the moment it doesn’t link to the subject
• Have you increased speed at the start? Is this necessary?
• Love the shot of your singer framed by the fence – more of interesting framing please!
• There’s a dodgy edit on the cut to the MCU
• Costuming works well
• Think about using different transitions and also superimposing shots on different video tracks
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